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Friday, 25 April 2014

Love




Somewhere out   there among
 several people there  is the man who you  
loves you immensely, who takes care of you who never
 lets you down, who holds your hand and walks with you, who                 
says you how much you mean to him ,who joins you in joy
and wipes your tears when you cry, who trusts you so
much and loves you more than himself, who gives
you all his time whenever possible and makes
 you  forget the world around you, who says
how beautiful you are seeing right
in your eyes and that’s when
you feel that true
love exists
  
                

   Keep Smiling 
- Sachin Prabhu

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    1. I think I do too Namrata :)
      Sweet poem Sachin :)

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    2. @namrata i c ;) tnx for reading :)

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    3. @sabeeha thanks a lot :) ^_^

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  2. nice poem .. i guess we all have one such person :)

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  3. Beautiful poem:-) Nicely written, Sachin. Happy to discover your blog

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    1. thanks a lot eli ^_^ means lot ^_^ keep visiting :)

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  4. beautiful lines. I am sure whoever read your poem, thought of their love. Love the way you arranged the lines in a heart shape.

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    1. tnq so much for dropping by n reading ^_^ :) keep visiting :)

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  5. The poem created a love structure isn't it ?? Wow

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    1. yea i wanted to be in heart shape :D tnq for reading :) keep visiting :)

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  6. This one is brilliant :) ur best so far!!

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    1. is it ? :D thank you so much swatz :D ^_^

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  7. This reminds me of my husband. Lovely poem.

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    1. aah thats a gr8 compliment :) thank you so much diiiiii ^_^

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  8. Hello there!!
    That is one lovely poem, Sachin. Not just because of the beautiful portrayal of emotions but it is also remarkable how you managed to make a perfect concrete poem (a poem which uses a word and stanza pattern which forms the shape of the central idea) Kudos...looking forward to reading more :) welcome to blogsphere...following you now.

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    1. hello swarnali :) tnq so much ^_^ ur words really means lot to me ^_^ followin u too :D

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